gas bottles, i did in black and white

back fence black and white also

sorry pics are so big, i resized them but no matter how small i go they are comign out that big, have 2 more to upload but just seeing if i can get them smaller first

the fence is working for me.
lets tweak it a bit, only if you want to.

It needs a point of focus to grab the attention, otherwise its a lot of detail with nothing for the eye to settle and rest on. (exactly like a scrap page)

So if there is part of the fence that's more weathered, with a screw coming out, or with something for the eye to grab focus on that. And rather than shoot a lot of the fence, only shoot a few of the timber slats. Enough to give the impression of a fence.

Think of where in the shot the point of focus will be placed. The eye will go there first.

Hope that helps a bit.

and BW is perfect!!!!

tiff

thanks Tiff, i already put the fence and gas bottles in the gallery but will have a play around with it later for my 3rd, thanks for tips, always appreciated!

pleasure.


xxx

t